I think I am easily influence by others, and I can˙t consistently.
How to do to get rid of these bad habits? I am a little trouble.
Always thinking about own vulnerable or too concerned about their own views on others.
I think the problem is my own state of mind.
I should do myself, have confidence in ourselves.
As for my perseverance, I think I can tell me did˙t give up.
I hope I can do it.
Hi, Amber:
回覆刪除You think that you are easily influenced by others. Can you give your readers a few specific examples or anecdotes? In fact, that's what you have to learn in English writing. You shouldn't just tell your readers a vague and overgeneralized statement. Instead, you should give them a more specific details with supporting evidence. In the end of your blog entry, you suddenly mentioned perseverance, which is not directly related to your key point. You should try to avoid this kind of problem in the future.